Saturday 18 July 2015

Developing a Character 1



If this man was going to be a character in a book, how would you describe him? 

 To make it an effective description use plenty of strong adjectives to describe how he looks, but also tell us about his feelings, his likes and dislikes, his family, his job or anything else that would turn him into an interesting character and make us want to read about him.

 I can't wait to hear your ideas! 
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10 comments:

  1. Jedi j20 July 2015 at 02:01

    Happy, exited , nice , hepfull, childless.
    His wife told him she had baby girl called hariet and boy called Dylan.
    Then he told he is football team won the FA cup.

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  2. Coleridge Blog Team20 July 2015 at 06:35

    I agree that he looks happy, excited and helpful. I'm really impressed that he has won the FA Cup too and I'd be interested to find out which team he played for and all about his footballing adventures. However I'm a bit confused about whether he is childless or not?

    Some great ideas and I'd definitely like to read more about him. Keep up the great work!

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    1. Jedi j21 July 2015 at 02:35

      Sorry when he was a child I meant he was orphaned. He was looked after by a lady called Elizabeth. As a child he loved to play netball. He played in the school team but he got bullied by other players. Because of what happend he decided to try football. He became an amazing player! When grew up he played for a football team called Rotherham Rovers and he scored for his team to win the FA cup.

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  3. Coleridge Blog Team21 July 2015 at 07:04

    That makes things much clearer. Sounds like the ideal main character for a football fiction book. What would you call him?

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    1. Jedi j22 July 2015 at 01:41

      I think his name is Clarck Wickersley.
      His nickname is bounce because is hair bounces when he runs.

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    2. Coleridge Blog Team22 July 2015 at 02:18

      That's a great name for a footballer. Keep up the good work!

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    3. Coleridge Blog Team22 July 2015 at 02:19

      That's a great name for a footballer. Keep up the good work!

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  4. Anonymous24 July 2015 at 13:24

    In a story I think he would be the happiest but weirdest person in the STORY!!!
    I think his real name is Cory because that is more like a kids name and kids are more happier then adults. His nickname is probably smiley because the picture in my head is him always smiling.

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    1. Coleridge Blog Team24 July 2015 at 14:22

      He definitely looks like a happy character, but why do you think he's weird? I love Cory as a first name and 'Smiley' would be great nickname. What job do you think he does?

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    2. Anonymous26 July 2015 at 03:49

      I think he works in Alton towers on the smiley, or he might be an actor.

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